Critical situation

well, i don't know how criticsm standard here... if i'm exagerrating or i am in wrong way to give a criticsm.. i'm sorry, maybe you can save my criticsm as your own private..

and.. i think we can see both of the breast from the camera here if she twisting her body like that... both of breast is separated according to collarbone right? just draw a pattren line from there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> ...

how about the upper body and the head is more down... gravity effects i mean...

and then maybe if you picture her, that she can't reach the bird, it'll be get more impact in helpless position... add a struggling expression in her face will add a point <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

lastly, how about add some tentacle at the lake below her? you'll add more helpless point...